In my opinion, the essay provided good compelling evidence showing how rodents, when face with multiple predators their activity seem to reduce in numbers
I would say this essay needs to improve on it's structure by providing more rhetorical appeals rather than one to get the attention of reader more
As I was reading Logos seem to be the most promiscuous appeal which made the reading more credible explaining how rodents tend to behave when encountering several predators but I hope in a near future you utilise more rhetorical appeals to get a wider audience interest in your