Blackberrying and Blackberry-picking each have irregular or no rhyme schemes which portrays the unpredictability of life whereas Nothing Gold Can Stay has a regular ‘abab’ rhyme scheme. Nothing Gold Can Stay is also a short poem and this and the simple rhyme scheme are to ensure that the message reaches the reader directly and remains with them.
Nothing Gold Can Stay and Blackberrying both contain personification and pathetic fallacy. In Nothing Gold Can Stay Mother Nature is personified as ‘her’ which is designed to show how nature has control over our cycles and that it is entirely out of human hands. In Blackberrying pathetic fallacy is used to bring alive the blackberries and to give them almost human characteristics ‘these they squander on my fingers’.
Blackberrying and Blackberry-picking also both each use human body parts throughout the poem to represent the mortality of the fruit as human mortality.
Blackberrying is a very colourful poem with various colours mentioned throughout and is also filled with rather more solid shapes e.g. ‘hooks, rock, thumb’. Similarly Blackberry-picking also uses lots of colour e.g. ’purple, red, green’ until the fruit begins to rot, when the colours begin to turn to distinctively less colourful ones e.g. ‘rat-grey’.
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