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Short Story: Deer Hunting
One dark and stormy night, Tim, a 26 year old man, was driving with his friends to a club since they had just gotten out of a bar. They were having a conversation like any other 26 year olds would talk about, when suddenly a deer with only one antler on its head crossed their path; it looked as if it was heading for a roofed ally.
“Whoa bros! Did you see what I just did”, Tim questioned.
“Yep”, they all said.
“Should we investigate?”
“Yea!”
They then got of the car to investigate the deer. When they went to the “crime scene” they were shocked to their very bones. The deer’s body was not even there, it disappeared. They knew that because there was a fence at the end of the ally and a deer can’t climb a fence.
“Wha? Where’s the deer?”
“Look
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Over a rock under a rock in between a rock but they were nowhere to be seen. Suddenly, he heard the sound of shuffling stone; it had to be them. When he looked where the noise was coming from Tim saw a crack in the stony wall luckily he had a hammer. He tore down the wall and saw skeletons wearing his friends clothing!
"Nice trick guys!"
"Wah what's this?"
Tim pick up a rock that stated, "Look at the entrance."
"Creepy", Tim said.
He then started to examine the skeletons, but then he noticed the skeletons still had flesh it was just dried out!
"GUYS WHAT HAPPENED!"
The bodies were running out of air, then in an instance they died. Quickly, still hoping to help his dead friends, runs to the hole that they fell in. He decides to listen to the rock and digs through the rubble and finds a bag. How strange it was to find a bag under so much rubble Tim wondered. Then without thinking, opens the bag and find a dead cat.
"What!", this seemed to anger Tim, "Why is this even here; this is absolutely no help at al..."
Then Tim stared at a carving on one of the walls it read, "You shouldn't of have brought your friends, so did the cat and now they're all dead." Tim looked behind him, the cave was filled with dead cats. He looked back at the wall; there was more writing. "Some say curiosity killed the cat, it didn't. I did! And as same, I do to

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