Fish was unaware of his discriminatory behavior because he could not see himself in Young’s shoes. As a white man, he has never had to face the discrimination and hardships that non-Caucasian people have. Additionally, Young made the decision to present his work in a way he would speak it, rather than shift his language to be approved by Fish’s ideas. He was able to humanize himself with technical errors which made him more relatable to his audience. Having read both documents, I believe that the English departments at most schools need to change and redirect their purpose to adopt some of Young’s ideas. I think the focus of an English class should be developing a student's voice. Instead of nitpicking, and stressing students out about small grammar errors in sentence length, teachers should be inflicting confidence into the students' opinions and voices. While Fish made valid points that could be beneficial during the early adolescent stage of life, empowering and creating a safe space for children to learn, speak, and grow their own opinions is more
Fish was unaware of his discriminatory behavior because he could not see himself in Young’s shoes. As a white man, he has never had to face the discrimination and hardships that non-Caucasian people have. Additionally, Young made the decision to present his work in a way he would speak it, rather than shift his language to be approved by Fish’s ideas. He was able to humanize himself with technical errors which made him more relatable to his audience. Having read both documents, I believe that the English departments at most schools need to change and redirect their purpose to adopt some of Young’s ideas. I think the focus of an English class should be developing a student's voice. Instead of nitpicking, and stressing students out about small grammar errors in sentence length, teachers should be inflicting confidence into the students' opinions and voices. While Fish made valid points that could be beneficial during the early adolescent stage of life, empowering and creating a safe space for children to learn, speak, and grow their own opinions is more