Something I disliked about your story was the fact that the king raped Talia. That was not kid friendly whereas, Perrault’s story the princess awoke when the prince arrived in her room. In Perrault’s version, I liked how they kept their children a secret from the prince’s mother because it kept me on my feet wondering if she’d ever find out. One last thing that kept me on my feet in both stories was when the cook tricked the mother and queen into thinking he cooked the kids because I wanted to see if they would find out or not. Other than that, I thought both your stories were fun to
Something I disliked about your story was the fact that the king raped Talia. That was not kid friendly whereas, Perrault’s story the princess awoke when the prince arrived in her room. In Perrault’s version, I liked how they kept their children a secret from the prince’s mother because it kept me on my feet wondering if she’d ever find out. One last thing that kept me on my feet in both stories was when the cook tricked the mother and queen into thinking he cooked the kids because I wanted to see if they would find out or not. Other than that, I thought both your stories were fun to