The Cabin Short Story

Cabin Story Sitting here by the beach with my two best friends Aketzeli and Jordyn drinking piña colada waking the waves. Well at least I was thinking of the trip being like that. I'm Jasmine I'm 18 and I will be telling you about are trip to Hawaii. We are on are own private plane flying to Hawaii. You are probably thinking why are they going to Hawaii we'll we just finished school and I thought that on your graduation party I would surprise them to go on a trip with me. Finally we land here on Oahu Hawaii island. I could already smell the fresh coconuts and pineapples it was making my mouth water like like it was a water fall . We then arrive at are 5 star hotel resort. Are first thing that we are doing is relax and then go to wet 'n' Wild water park . We send about 4 hours there and then go back to the hotel.
It sounded to us that I was just a old tale but the older lady's would never ever shut up about it. So the Aketzali went up to the old rinckly woman and asked were it was and why was it called the Mystery Cabin. She said " because when she was 19 her and her boyfriend was taking a walk in the forest/woods, and they saw this old run down cabin. Her boyfriend Jeff went to go into the cabin and it looked like a horror film. Because there was a old wooden rocking chair and rats all over the grounded. The old lady said she can't talk about it any more because she didn't any to get to detailed with it because it just creep her out. So I ask were was the cabin at she said " in the south, east part of Oahu