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The Discardment Poem Tone
In the poem “The Discardment” there is a definite shift in tone at a certain area in the poem. This shift occurs at the oxymoron “intolerable joy”. This shift seems to be from a more of a lighthearted tone to more of a bitter tone. In this poem you can mainly see through light hearted tone through the description of the joy that the woman has when she received the present. In the poem it states the following “She put it on with exclamations,/ Her eyes shone, she called and cried/ She danced and mimed, sang snatches of the song./ she called blessings in her native tongue”. In this line there is an ability to see the light hearted area of the poem. We can see this due to the overwhelming joy that she has when she received the gift. The other

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