Given a brief description of the setting where the author describes the surroundings of their flat as sad and not much alive - Della watches a "gray cat walking a gray fence in a gray backyard" (6) and letting the audience know about the economic situation of the Young’s family, it is not very clear if the setting are intended to contrast with the warm and cozy of their love or if is to describe the moment there were living since Jim’s salary was shrunk.
The physical description of the characters is vague giving only few characteristics like that they are young, Della has a long brown hair and Jim was quiet, tall and skinny. The author describes Della’s hair as something so precious that is capable to inspire envy even in the richest Queen, and he compares Jim’s watch with something that Kings Solomon will like to have the author is making clear that these two things are the couple