Faculty of Art
Department of English
Writing III
Section (10)
Third Assignment
The Israeli Occupation of Palestine
Alaa' Waleed Sbitan
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Dr.Hasan Hamad
First Semester 2013/2014
Writing III
Dr.Hasan Hamad Essay Skeleton Outline
Topic: The Israeli Occupation of Palestine
Style: Conventional
Mode: Global Description Macro: Definition Micro: Exemplification
Mood: Global: Negative Macro: Negative Micro: Positive
Pivotal theme: affirming the suffering of the Palestinian families due the Israeli occupation.
Thesis statement: Until now, Palestinian families are suffering from the Israeli occupation and its tyranny on different levels.
Messages: On the lines: About the Israeli occupation and the Palestinian families. Between the lines: Identify the Israeli occupation. Under the lines: How hard the Israeli occupation on the Palestinian families. Beyond the lines: How Palestinian families are living in this occupation.
Supporting Ideas:
I. Introduction: (general sentences about the Israeli occupation in the world ending with the thesis statement) Funnel/thesis statement contains general and specific information.
II. Paragraph 2
A. Occupation
a. Central component in restructuring
1. Land
2. Identity
b. Methods of conquering
1. Violence
2. Inherent abuses
III. Paragraph 3
B. Occupation is hard
a. Never spares anyone
1. Targets innocent children
2. Destroys children's dreams b. Bloodshed
1. Children's screaming
2. Unstoppable attacks
IV. Paragraph 4
C. Israeli soldiers
a. Attack
1. Interrogate
2. Arrest
b. Humiliate
1. Arrested after midnights or in the early morning
2. Arrested whether guilty or not
V. Paragraph 5