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Once upon a time, I was walking through the field beside the old abandoned building in my neighborhood. I found a body, I didn’t know if the body was a man or a woman but as I got closer I see that the person was struggling to breath, I didn’t know what to do so I turned and ran, About halfway to my house I Knew i couldn’t just leave the person there so I turned back around and went to find them. When I found the person I found out that it was a young woman. She struggled to tell me that she had been kidnapped and was brutaly asalted and was left there to die. Without hesitation I knew I had to try to save her. She was at least 26 years old and she must have been at least 4 months pregnant. She was stabbed 3 times in her stomach and 6 times in her legs. …show more content…
All I could do was call an ambulance and take my jacket off and wrap her stomach tight, I found a old blanket a few feet away and I wrapped her stab wounds around her legs. By the time I was done the Paramedics were there. They asked if I would come to the hospital with them so of course I did I stayed right by her side When we got to the hospital she had to have an emergency C-Section. Surprisingly the baby was not harmed at all! The baby was healthy but very premature. They rushed the baby to the NICU, later I found out that the baby was a boy and he had been put on a breathing tube and a feeding tube. He has a long road to recovery. Meanwhile down stairs his mother is on life support and she has had to have 4 blood transfusions. She’s gone through surgery and the doctors are hoping she’ll pull through the night. But they don’t think she will because of the violent stab wounds. The police have collected hair and blood found under her nails. The police have took it to be tested to see if they can find the guy who tried to murder

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