Writer’s Response to Peer Review Patricia arias Central Connecticut State University Writing for the Social Work Profession – SW225 4/24/14 Dear ____‚ In this letter I will be responding to a peer review you made on my cover letters. I would like to begin by thanking you for reviewing my and assisting me in improving it. You pointed out certain things I overlooked while completing my first draft and made some helpful suggestions. Throughout the letter I will be addressing the concerns and suggestions
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though Thomas Edison did not call his mistakes failures‚ he learned from them‚ and continued to try other combinations until he finally succeeded. People fail‚ just like Thomas Edison‚ but they can make the choice to learn from their mistakes. William Zinsser‚ the author of “College Pressures” discusses the importance and value failure can have in people’s lives by relating it to the experiences students face while in college. The significance of failure is very critical in people’s lives because
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bullying About a week ago I was assigned a film project on bullying and peer pressure. What my group did was a recreation of the breakfast club. Although I’ve never seen the movie I was very excited to start. The project really did help me learn the harmful effects of bullying and peer pressure. One part that showed me about bullying is when one of the main characters‚ Sophia‚ confesses to the group that she told everyone about a girl’s crush through Instagram. That scene made
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RUBRIC – PEER EVALUATION (ASSIGNMENT #4) STUDENT NAME (completing the peer evaluation):__________________________ Please review the following criteria and assign a grade to each of your peers within your group. There are 5 criteria worth a maximum of one mark each. This peer evaluation is confidential AND must be submitted to the instructor on the date of your presentation. Criteria 1 mark 0.5 mark 0 mark Attendance Attends all meetings. Misses one meeting. Misses more than one meeting. Role within
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Sean Abrishami Edhd460 Prof. Dinsmore Article Critique Title: Peer Exclusion and Victimization: Processes That Mediate the Relation Between Peer Group Rejection and Children’s Classroom Engagement and Achievement? Authors: Eric S. Buhs Gary W. Ladd and Sarah L. Herald The thought that peer exclusion is correlated with children’s classroom achievements and adjustment has been hypothesized since the 1930’s. Much research and empirical evidence for such hypotheses have since been collected
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Kidney Failure The causes‚ effects‚ treatment‚ and the role of diabetes The kidneys play a vital role in our body function in many different aspects. Not only do they filter the blood and excrete waste products‚ but they also control the body’s blood pressure‚ maintain water levels‚ and simulate the production of red blood cells (Wedro). Kidney Failure is a serious medical condition where the kidneys fail to help maintain an electrolyte balance‚ and adequately filter waste products and toxins
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Artificial Heart/ Heart Transplants A natural heart has two pumps‚ each has two chambers. The right atrium pumps oxygen-depleted blood from the body into the right ventricle. The right ventricle pumps blood to the lungs. The left atrium sends aerated blood from the lungs into the left ventricle‚ which pumps blood out of the body. With each heartbeat‚ the two atria contracts together‚ followed by the large ventricles. Congestive heart failure is when the heart fails to pump blood. Heart failure will
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are to read‚ reference‚ and summarize four articles‚ each on the same topic or very closely related topics which we have studied or will study during the term so virtually any topic related to psychology will be acceptable. You will complete and turn in a Connection Paper Form which is a Word® document and is available in AC Online > Lessons > Connection Paper Information > Connection Paper Form. It must be done in Word®. At least one of the articles is to come from a scholarly source and at least
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“Failure is the key to success; each mistake teaches us something.” -Morihei Ueshiba The fundamental part about making a mistake is learning from it and using it to as a lesson in life. Especially at a young age it is essential for the person to look at their mistake and try to use it for judgment in future situations. During my junior year in high school I smoked a small amount marijuana several hours before performing in the play “Goodnight Desdemona‚ Good morning Juliet” which was performed on
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Interest in and Communication with Peers How does each child communicate with his or her peers? Is the child communicating through sounds‚ touch‚ eye contact‚ movement‚ or words? I observed children at the Sandusky Mall play area. There were a lot children between the ages of two and three years old. Most children have probably never met each other before‚ but that didn’t stop them from interacting. Some children were able to communicate verbally‚ others used touch and eye contact. The children
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