* 1.Is my title and introduction enticing? * My title and introduction is in my opinion enticing. * 2.Is my thesis effective? * I believe that my thesis statement is very effective. * 3.Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? * The details included in my essay should give the reader a clear view on my experience. * 4.Are the events presented in a logical sequence? * The events included in my essay are presented in
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I Have Quit? Would I have quit? No I would’ve stayed and fought until the battle was won. Here are my three reasons why. To begin with 90% of our troops were still alive and fighting (Document A). Another point is that congressional congress came to help us (Document B). Furthermore we had willingness and contentment (Document C). To begin with
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1 The Islamia University of Bahawalpur ADMISSION FORM Session 2011-2012 IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Please read Instructions carefully 1 Incomplete application shall not be entertained 2 Any incorrect statement made in this form may lead to disciplinary action and/or cancellation of admission at any time 3 Application must reach the concerned admission desk by last date fixed for receipt of applications‚ failing which application will not be entertained 4 Candidates applying for program(s) where
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really saw it full expressed. The other virtues follow from it. He never gives and defends a definition of it although he does characterize it. 2. It is dearer than life itself--the man of jen will sacrifice his life to preserve jen‚ and conversely it is what makes life worth living. 3. Jen is a sense for the dignity of human life--a feeling of humanity towards others and self-esteem for yourself. a. Such feeling applies to all men--not just one nation or race. It is the foundation of
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My Role Model in My Life. Everyone has a role model in their lives. They could be our parent‚ friend‚ teacher‚ or even an author of a book. For me‚ my role model is a president‚ his name is Abraham Lincoln. Abraham Lincoln became 16th President of the United States in 1860. He born in February 12‚ 1809 and pass away in April 15‚ 1865. Abraham Lincoln had good leadership and that is why he became the president of the United State. Beside leadership skills‚ He had very good determination to decided
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An Event That Change My Life Life is about making choices‚ but some of them can even change our life. Two years ago I decided to come to America to join my husband who is a doctoral student in a university‚ although I knew it was really a challenge to me. This significant decision that I’ve made changed everything about me and my life. That was a tough decision to make. It means I will leave my homeland‚ friends and go to a far-away place to my family. I must adjust to the alien environment
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When I come to the realization that my childhood is coming to an end‚ I notice that it is hard to keep track of all of the accomplishments I have made throughout life. However‚ the greatest achievement that resonates in my mind was when I had overcome my suicidal tendencies and depression during my sophomore year of high school. The person I was before didn’t think I would make it to this point in life where I would be writing my personal statement for colleges. I honestly thought I was not going
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The sweat poured down my body. I knew I had to give everything in this moment. Right here right now soaked and drained. Every breath I take in I realize I am overcoming everything. Obstacles in life are very much like the increasing weight and strain I apply to my body. The love I have for bodybuilding is rooted with a dark past. I feel serenity knowing that I am the only one who can break myself down just to build myself back up. My whole life I allowed others to beat me down and hold me back. I
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“The Darkest Night of My Life and How God Save Me” Our lives are composed of sorrows and joys. If today we are happy‚ tomorrow we may be sad and vice versa. There are times when everything seems to be perfect and nothing can compare with the happiness that we feel during those unforgettable‚ momentous days‚ while there are some moments when life becomes so sad that they leave a trace of it for the rest of our life. The darkest night of my life was the day my grandmother died. She’s not only a
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fade in and out of my blurry vision‚ I realized something was wrong when I was still sitting on the bench. I was on varsity baseball‚ ( that’s what I thought I was gonna spend the rest of my life doing) my grade point average was rising‚ and I was surrounded by positive people all around me who gave off a positive vibe. Of course all good things must to an end right? Well my good times came to end quickly. One fateful‚ mildly chilly‚ and cloudy april afternoon commenced where my stomach grumbled with
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