product better? - If you chose to ignore some feedback‚ why did you do so? After meeting with Mrs. Johnson‚ I had to review over the suggestions and reflect about the feedback I received. For the most part‚ I followed the suggestions. The things that I revised specifically was simple grammar errors and showing progression of the characters and conflict‚ which needed to connect to the thesis statement. In the case of the simple grammar errors‚ there was part of a sentence that did not make sense‚ “...how
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you created the National Commission on Excellence in Education and directed it to present a report on the quality of education in America to you and to the American people by April of 1983. It has been my privilege to chair this endeavor and on behalf of the members of the Commission it is my pleasure to transmit this report‚ A Nation at Risk: The Imperative for Educational Reform. Our purpose has been to help define the problems afflicting American education and to provide solutions‚ not search
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"I like a look of Agony‚" by Emily Dickinson‚ uses literary devices to affect the reader. People normally have a fear of agony‚ but Dickinson uses literary devices such as imagery and personification to reveal her contrasting enjoyment of this usually disagreeable emotion. The opening line "I like a look of Agony‚" could be interpreted as brutal and cold. However‚ completely reading the poem allows the reader to understand what the first line actually means. Dickinson does not like a look of agony
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seasons — Summer‚ Rains‚ Early Autumn‚ Late Autumn‚ Winter and Spring. Actually there are summer‚ Rains and winter. But we can feel the delicate shades of difference between Early and Late Autumn‚ or between spring and summer. Of all these seasons‚ I like summer the most. This may seem Stanger‚ but it is a fact for me. Let me first narrate the good and the bad sides of the seasons clearly. In summer‚ the heat becomes oppressive. It causes physical hardship that sometimes become unbearable. We feel
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Introduction/ Thesis Statement In 1973 the Arab countries of Egypt and Syria‚ who were still upset over their humiliating defeat by in Israeli forces during the Six Day War in 1967 planned a military attack on Israel. While their intent was not to destroy the country of Israel‚ they did want to weaken Israel’s power and reclaim the lands that they had lost during the Six Days War. The lands that the Arabs wished to reclaim were the Suez Peninsula and Golan Heights. Israel had stated that they would
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Throughout life I have stayed in many different places. Moving from the Philippines‚ Georgia‚ and then Texas has given me the opportunity to live in a wide variety of residences. My family and I have experienced residing in both apartments and houses. We have observed many differences in the two choices of homes and have become very knowledgeable of life in both dwellings. Living in an apartment or living in a house? When you are trying to save money and only have so much to spend each month
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In quarter one of eighth grade my English class read The Wall by William Sutcliffe. This is a book about the Israeli-Palestinian conflict that uses many symbols to portray many messages. Ms. Zito asked my class and I to write an essay about a symbol and what it normally represents‚ and what it represents in The Wall. From the symbol paper assignment I learned what a symbol is‚ how to create a good thesis statement‚ and how to backup a thesis with evidence. I learned that symbol is something that
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GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Bobby Watson GEN/200 1/26/2012 Jackie Novak GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Achieving Collegiate Success through Personal Responsibility I. Achieving collegiate success through personal responsibility is your responsibility. My thesis statement is: Even though collegiate success is directly proportional to effort applied‚ we must develop a true sense of purpose and responsibility because individuals
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Women’s rights to have independence‚ education‚ and leadership are unthinkable in the Middle East. A woman going to school may often be targeted by the Taliban and other violent protesters. Malala Yousafzai‚ writer of I am Malala‚ talks about her struggles with the Taliban‚ and her culture growing up in Pakistan as a girl. Malala’s father inspires her to fight tremendously for her beliefs‚ even though society disagrees because of her gender. Yousafzai message shares how with the help and support
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“Black Like I Thought I Was” Q1- Wayne Joseph struggles whether to tell people h’s black because of all the racial segregation going on. He doesn’t have a problem being black. As he was still qualified as colored‚ he was not raised as one so he didn’t think of what he was. He was perfectly fine with what he was but he just didn’t want to tell anybody he actually was. Personally‚ I don’t think there’s anything wrong with him‚ maybe he just had a complex about being colored and didn’t want to say
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