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A Rarotongan Donuts: A Short Story
I knew it was colossal but i was astonish when i saw it,it stretched with trees for miles on end, The day was hot with the temperature of 28c, sweat was running down my face like Usain Bolt taking the lead. We entered my Auntie,Mum,dad,Jim and Myself I could hear the nature’s sound,Water trickling,Birds fluttering,sticks snapping under our every step. The first 3 minutes was just tramping around the bush,but suddenly root like steps stretched for about 10-5 tiring minutes,It went something like this….Stumble,Trip,Fall,Stumble,Trip,Fall, the cycle never ending!

Finally we sighted the enormous fat tree that my Auntie had been mentioning,so that was our break for water a few Rarotongan Donuts, and we were up once more climbing those tremendous
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