Aids - Essay 5
AIDS
Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about Aids
My opinion about aids is that it is a very deadly disease, but completely preventable disease.
(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though that aids is transmitted, it effects millions of people in America because and That millions of people in America have AIDS.
Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
That aids is transmitted
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that That aids is transmitted is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #2
Even though That aids is transmitted, It effects millions of people in america because .
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason It effects millions of people in america is because That millions of people in america have AIDS.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that That millions of people in america have AIDS is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up
Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about Aids
My opinion about aids is that it is a very deadly disease, but completely preventable disease.
(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though that aids is transmitted, it effects millions of people in America because and That millions of people in America have AIDS.
Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
That aids is transmitted
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that That aids is transmitted is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #2
Even though That aids is transmitted, It effects millions of people in america because .
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason It effects millions of people in america is because That millions of people in america have AIDS.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that That millions of people in america have AIDS is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up