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Alternate Ending Of Hiking
Jamisha and Shayna went hiking with Jamisha’s dad and mom. They go up to the mountains, and it is blue sky and a fresh stream. Jamisha and Shayna put a tent on the ground, but Shayna look sad, she cries. “What are you crying Shanyna?” said Jamisha. Shayna said, “I am scared for bears. They maybe eat me.” Jamisha dad said, “bears don’t like noise, they run away.” “OK. I will make a noise,” Jamisha said. Jamisha sings a song at night. The bears stay away. Shayna liked the song. She fall

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