Analysis Of Miniaturization Of Atoms By Kakalios

The essay written by Kakalios discusses the miniaturization of atoms, and if it is possible to shrink a human. The essay has several problems, such as including unneeded information throughout the essay and in the conclusion, and not having a clear thesis statement. These things put the structure into question.
To begin with, the essay’s introduction lasts for several pages and does not make the main point clearly known. Instead, a comic book character named Dr. Pym is discussed, making one wonder if the essay is about him. But in light of the topic that is introduced later-miniaturization- it is clear that this discourse about Pym is unneeded. The reader’s time is wasted as Kakalios mentions content like Pym’s finances, the villains he has