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Analysis: The Future Loop
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Jack is a flexible man that has the ability to move all the bones in his body without even practicing yoga. He could survive many years without food. He came from a family of four, a sister, brother and his parents. They were not very wealthy but had enough for the family to survive. Jack didn't achieve anything in his childhood other than gold medals in flexibility competitions. One day while Jack was on the way to the market, he noticed a big man with a young face. The big man approached him and said, “Hi, I'm Danielle”, with a really rough old man's voice. Jack realized he met a peculiar friend without searching on the internet for friends. Danielle is a man with many lengths to his body. He can be six
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They were ugly, scary, and were wearing suits like they were getting ready for Danielle’s upcoming funeral.
“Do you know their master?” Jack asked.
“Yes, Ithink that's all you need to know.” Danielle said back.
“It's a good choice if you get a partner.” Jack suggested.
“Fine, you can come.” Danielle accepted Jack’s company to the mission to defeat all Wimbers.

Danielle explains the plan to Jack. The plan was that they were going to the Wimbers estate, and plant their favorite drink, but its not what they think the drink is. The drink is a planted poison to kill only the Wimbers since they enjoy drinking the most expensive whiskey in the future
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Danielle grabbed the shotgun that was placed outside of the small dark room. And points it at Don.
“ You want to kill me?” Don said with a british accent.
“Then do it!”
“They will catch you all and eat your brains.”
“Remember to hide well, they're coming for you.”

Danielle said “ Jack, look away.” Then the loud shotgun blast was echoing into the house. Don was finally dead. Jack and the rest of the children start searching the house checking if someone was in there. They found a dead body of a woman.
“Iknow her!” Jack said with a cracky voice. And then started crying ”Shes my mother!”

Jack had a million things going in his mind of full of memories with her. All the fun stuff and the sad stuff they did together. It was too late for them to save her. She was shot four times with a shotgun in the hands and stomach. she started to open her eyes one last time. Then she said,” The loop of the Hell, they're coming! Go save yourselves!” Then she spit out her last words “Ilove you Jack, it wasn't my choice.” Then closed her eyes and left.

Danielle told Jack,”You helped me in this mission, its my jobs now to help you!” Then traveled out into the world to search for a loop for the

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