Historical skills and knowledge required to show competence.
Expanded Core
Historical skills and knowledge required to show excellence.
1. Has acceptable thesis. 1 Point (addresses comparison of the issues or themes specified) 2. Addresses all parts of the 2 Points of the question, though not necessarily evenly or thoroughly. (Addresses most parts of the (1) question: for example, deals with differences but not similarities) 3. Substantiates thesis with 2 Points appropriate evidence. (Partially substantiates thesis with (1) appropriate evidence.) 4. Makes at least three relevant, 1 Point direct comparisons between or among societies. 5. Analyzes at least three reasons 1 Point for a similarity or difference identified in a direct comparison. Expands beyond basic core of
1-7 Points. The basic core of a 0-2 Points score of 7 must be achieved before a student can earn expanded core points. Examples:
• Has a clear, analytical, and comprehensive thesis
• Addresses all parts of the question (as relevant): comparisons, chronology, causation, connections, themes, interactions, content.
• Provides ample historical evidence to substantiate thesis.
• Relates comparisons to larger global context.
• Makes several direct comparisons consistently between or among societies.
• Consistently analyzes the causes and effects of relevant similarities and differences. Subtotal 7 Points
Subtotal 2 Points TOTAL 9 Points Comparative Essay Notes
1. The time allotted for the essay is 40 minutes, 5 minutes of which should be spent planning and/or outlining the answer.