Appropriate Discourse

According to the article "Is There Anything Wrong With This Picture" by Lauren Tashis and Kristian Lewis is seems to be that because of phones and other technology, people are more rude than they were in the past. After reading over this article and looking at all the evidence I determined that having good manners benefits everyone. First of all, people with good manner tend to be more successful. For instance, in this article the author states that "Studies show that teens with good manners are more likely to be successful: they get better grades, and are more impressive in job interviews. This shows that having good manners can help you get good grades and even secure you a job. Another great piece of evidence to support my claim is that
practicing manners can make the world a more pleasant place to live in. The article explains, that many things we do involving our phones are actually bad manners. For example, taking and than posting bad pictures of your friends on social media can be considered bad manners. To add on to this, listening to music too loudly in your earbuds can disturb others. All in all instead of texting on our phones and not using manners why don't we take the time to appreciate all the things around us.