Step 2 (EVIDENCE): Even though both peers complimented me because I used a lot of credible sources. One of them said that my voice is lost because I included too much evidence. Therefore, I will try to start each paragraph with my own original sentence and then start supporting it with evidence. Also, I will remove unnecessary and/or excessive
Step 2 (EVIDENCE): Even though both peers complimented me because I used a lot of credible sources. One of them said that my voice is lost because I included too much evidence. Therefore, I will try to start each paragraph with my own original sentence and then start supporting it with evidence. Also, I will remove unnecessary and/or excessive