Introduction Paragraph (Lead) As we live we learn many things that make us grow into adults. As we reach out adult hood our innocence is taken away from all that we have seen, heard, and learned about. (Title, Author, Summary) In the book “Bless Me, Ultima” by Rudolfo Anaya, Antonio is the main character. He is a very young and innocent boy. Antonio’s struggle is trying to find himself and answering all the questions he has about God and evil. Antonio is afraid to lose his innocence so he tries to grip to it as tightly as possible. Antonio comes to realize that as he lives all the knowledge he has gain makes him lose his innocence.
Body Paragraph #1 (Topic Sentence) First, the more knowledge you gain the more questions you ask yourself. (Introduced Quoute)Antonio questioned why God had let Narciso die and why evil was able to live in the world. (Use an effective quote, properly cited) “The questions Florence had posed were the same questions I wanted answered. Why was the murder of Narciso allowed? Why was evil allowed? “(196).. (Explain why the quote was used and tie it back to support the thesis) In the story as Antonio questions and doubts God he loses his innocence slowly. Thoughts of denial towards the God of the church crept into Antonio’s mind which mad him sin. Once a person sins then part of their innocence is taken away.
Body Paragraph #2 (Topic Sentence) Experiences in life and the knowledge that comes with them help a person grow and develop but also let’s go of some of the innocence in the person. (Introduce Quote) Antonio sees Tenorio kill Narcisco with his very own eyes. (Use an effective quote, properly cited) “For some time I did not move. I could not believe I was alive; I could not believe I was not dreaming a frightful nightmare. Then a moan from the dying man called me, and I walked to Narciso and knelt at his side”( 169). ).. (Explain why the quote was used and tie it back to support the thesis) Antonio