Boom Boom Boom Pow: Poem Comparison
Boom Boom Pow by:mason ¨Run run get away from here, it's going to explode.¨
I was 40% bored out of my MIND because I have been in a car for 8 hours with only 4 stops , but I also was 60% crazy hyped because we were in Illinois and that meant we were close to Havana the city that my Grandpa and Grandma lived in. Just then I saw the small windmill in their front yard, that when my INSANE EAGER-OMETER was at 100%, so I screamed at the top of my lungs ¨We Are Here We Are HERE.¨
So my mom pulled into the driveway and we started unloading all the bags, will I unloaded all the unstable fireworks with wared, tremblay hands holding up the week …show more content…
I found a firecracker on the ground. I put 2 and 2 together and thought why not light it, it won't kill anybody, and i'm killing 2 birds with one stone because i’m using up my punk and not wasting it and getting rid of a firecracker. I picked it up and as soon as I touched my punk to the wick it lit and burned as quick as a cheetah and EXPLOdED right in my face. I fell back and my ears were ringing I couldn't hear anything. I was partially blinded by the explosion. As I open my eye I am laying in the dirt so I quickly stood up and looked up to see if anyone saw, luckily no one saw so I ran quickly …show more content…
Me and my mom brought out the box into the field, far from the house. It had 6 inches of fuse for precaution and to give people a chance to get away. I touched the puck to the tip of the wick and it instantly started burning, me and my mom started walking, we walked about 6 feet from the boom boom box. The first shot went into the air and exploded with a huge BOOM. Then the unbelievable happened. The force from the first shot tipped the boom boom box over, that is when it shot off it’s second shot into the woods and tuned to the left and then into my Grandpa’s garden, then under the trampoline.
That's when my mom yelled ¨Run, run get away from here.¨ Then it turned and shot at the HOUSE. everyone started running inside, I jumped off the trailer and as soon as I did a shot exploded at the foot of the porch. But a spark got inside the box and lite of all the others in a big bang to end the day.
From that day forward I learned that I should be more careful with fireworks, I should always have an adult present while using fire, think twice before you act, and take care of family first. Even though a lot of things went wrong nobody got hurt and nothing was damaged or combusted, so in a way everything went as planned???? Well at the end of the day it was just a little something to laugh about, so it is ok to take risks every once in awhile. Oh and don't forget to be careful with
I was 40% bored out of my MIND because I have been in a car for 8 hours with only 4 stops , but I also was 60% crazy hyped because we were in Illinois and that meant we were close to Havana the city that my Grandpa and Grandma lived in. Just then I saw the small windmill in their front yard, that when my INSANE EAGER-OMETER was at 100%, so I screamed at the top of my lungs ¨We Are Here We Are HERE.¨
So my mom pulled into the driveway and we started unloading all the bags, will I unloaded all the unstable fireworks with wared, tremblay hands holding up the week …show more content…
I found a firecracker on the ground. I put 2 and 2 together and thought why not light it, it won't kill anybody, and i'm killing 2 birds with one stone because i’m using up my punk and not wasting it and getting rid of a firecracker. I picked it up and as soon as I touched my punk to the wick it lit and burned as quick as a cheetah and EXPLOdED right in my face. I fell back and my ears were ringing I couldn't hear anything. I was partially blinded by the explosion. As I open my eye I am laying in the dirt so I quickly stood up and looked up to see if anyone saw, luckily no one saw so I ran quickly …show more content…
Me and my mom brought out the box into the field, far from the house. It had 6 inches of fuse for precaution and to give people a chance to get away. I touched the puck to the tip of the wick and it instantly started burning, me and my mom started walking, we walked about 6 feet from the boom boom box. The first shot went into the air and exploded with a huge BOOM. Then the unbelievable happened. The force from the first shot tipped the boom boom box over, that is when it shot off it’s second shot into the woods and tuned to the left and then into my Grandpa’s garden, then under the trampoline.
That's when my mom yelled ¨Run, run get away from here.¨ Then it turned and shot at the HOUSE. everyone started running inside, I jumped off the trailer and as soon as I did a shot exploded at the foot of the porch. But a spark got inside the box and lite of all the others in a big bang to end the day.
From that day forward I learned that I should be more careful with fireworks, I should always have an adult present while using fire, think twice before you act, and take care of family first. Even though a lot of things went wrong nobody got hurt and nothing was damaged or combusted, so in a way everything went as planned???? Well at the end of the day it was just a little something to laugh about, so it is ok to take risks every once in awhile. Oh and don't forget to be careful with