In this essay, I will evaluate the logic of Tan-Li Hsu’s argument, considering whether the support for her thesis is appropriate, believable and consistent, and complete. While Hsu’s argument is logical and well supported but it lacks a brighter side to caffeine when used in moderation. Hsu’s neglects to consider that the marketing of these caffeine filled drinks are not generally marketed to teenagers but to college students who would need that extra boost to finish a paper or that class project.
Hsu provides appropriate support for thesis. Throughout the argument, Hsu cites from six different journals and articles on the subject. The quotes, examples and statistics all support the reasons why Hsu beliefs on the labeling of these energy drinks. In paragraph 2, Hsu provides statistics from “Teens” on the percentage of teenagers that engage in the drinking of energy drinks, which suggest that this thirty-one...