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Monster in the Bear Lake
During spring, break Jack’s family decided to go to their grandparent’s house. His grandparents live in the small town in Utah that is surrounded by the trees and had a lake. The lake was called, Bear Lake. If you travel to Bear Lake in Utah on a quiet day, you just might catch a glimpse of the Bear Lake Monster.
When his parents made plans Jack asked his father, “Hey dad, can I take some of my friends to come with us?”
His father replied, “Yes, you can invite your friends to come with us.” At that time Jack was the happiest kid ever like he won a Jackpot. That night Jack called his friends and told them to get ready for tomorrow. The next day, his family and friends left from his house and arrived at his grandparent’s house during the afternoon. His grandparents welcomed everyone. Jack’s grandpa told everyone to go get some rest because they are all going to the campground and they will build a campfire, eat marshmallows, and all other fun stuff.
That evening everybody was sitting at the camp fire and having fun. But, Jack was curious about something, then after while he spoke.
“Hey grandpa can we go to the Bear Lake tomorrow?” Jack asks.
His grandpa looked nervous and stayed quiet for few seconds and said, “Sorry, we can’t go to the Bear Lake.”
“Why?” Jack asks.
Then his grandfather told us what is in the Bear Lake. Bear Lake was a demon place. There is a monster that lives in Bear Lake. The monster looks like a huge brown snake and is nearly 90 feet long. It has ears that stick out from the side of its skinny head and a mouth big enough to eat a man. According to some, it has small legs. But in the water - watch out! It can swim faster than anybody else and it moves a mile a minute on a good day. Monster was a Tornado running through the ground and water. Sometimes the monster likes to sneak up on unwary swimmers and blow water at them.
I heard about a man once who spotted the monster early one evening as he

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