Christie makes mistakes when it comes to Orwell’s first rule of never using a simile, metaphor or figure of speech were used to seeing in print. Christie uses the terms like “bringing people around the table” or “when the chips are down”, which is …show more content…
Christie doesn’t seem to like this one. He frequently uses words to describe other things in a happier sort of upbeat feeling. This makes sense because of what has just happened to his home state of New Jersey and his trying to keep things light hearted after the storm. Yet this isn’t what Orwell advises and things such as wonderful New Jersey, and gracious congratulations seem to be words that could be easily taken from the speech without loss of what Christie is trying to get across. In this Christie also take a very long time at the beginning of his speech to thank his rival and to show appreciation and love for his family, this latter part comes in at the end of the speech also. Though one can respect Christie’s admiration of his family, it is very clear that this is not really necessary at all and could be cut from the speech all together. We don’t need to know that Christie is a good father; we’d much prefer to know how he is as a governor.
Orwell’s fourth is never use a passive when you could use an active. Christie delivers on this one. He seems to always be using an active tone to describe this situation. This makes sense though because he is waste deep in the aftermath of hurricane sandy, and it’s a very personal topic for him with New Jersey being his home state. This gives his speech a much more personal feeling and also shortens it because he isn’t using words to help other words that really don’t need to be helped to express their intended