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Comparison: A Fictional Narrative
Sunday Morning

It was Sunday morning, everyone was awake and they got dressed. Here’s their outfit their wearing today…

Jessica/Victoria- http://www.polyvore.com/think_im_in_love_with/set?id=57230373

Danny/Lola- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=57230914

Emma/Shelby- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=57231319

Mason- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=57317880

Jordan- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=57317880

Jessica- Hey, Victoria! Let’s check out the girls if their awake.

Victoria- Okay *Follows Jessica*

Jessica- *Walking to the guess room and knocked*

Lola- *Opens the door* Hey Jessica

Jessica- Hey! Are you guys dressed?

Lola/Emma/Shelby- Yeah

Victoria- Then let’s check out the guys

Lola- …show more content…
Victoria- I’m just asking

Jessica- Okay then

Victoria- What do you want to do next?

Jessica- Hum, how about this *Hit Victoria’s arm* Tag your it

Victoria- You want to play that game. Okay than *Tagged Danny* Tag your it

Danny- *Stand up and tagged Lola* Your it

Lola- Fine *Ran to Emma* Tag your it

Emma- Okay then *Tagged Shelby* Your it

Shelby- Oh no, you’re not *Ran to Jessica* Tag your it

Jessica- Man it’s me again *Looking for someone to tag and sees Mason* Tag your it Mason

Mason- Oh no, You’re not *Chased Jessica around and tagged her*

Jessica- *Tagged back and fell backward while hold on Mason’s shirt*

Mason- *Fell on top of Jessica and looked in her brown eyes*

Jessica- *Looked in his big brown eyes*

Mason- *Leans in to kiss her*

Jessica- *Leans in too*

Danny- Hey guys, are you okay?

Jessica- *Turned her head to Danny*

Mason- *Stop and turned to Danny* Yeah, I’m okay *Helps Jessica up*

Jessica- *cleans her outfit* Yea I’m ok …show more content…
Lola- It’s 12:00 p.m.

Jessica- Oh man, I have to get home

Emma- Why?

Victoria- Because she has a date tonight

Shelby- Oh yeah, I remember

Jessica- Yeah, so I have to get going

Danny- Okay then, have fun on your date

Jessica- Thanks. Victoria, are you coming with me?

Victoria- Yeah

Jessica- Okay, let’s go

Mason- Wait, I’m coming

Victoria- Why?

Mason- Because I have to babysit her little cousin

Jessica- Oh yeah, come on

Mason/Victoria- *Walks with Jessica*

When Jessica made it to her house she ran up stairs with Victoria and Mason was down stairs with Jessica’s Mom.

At Jessica’s House

Jessica’s Mom- Hi Mason

Mason- Hi Mrs. Vega

Mrs. Vega- Mason this is who you’re babysitting?

Mason- Oh hi there my name is Mason

Michael- Hi my name is Michael

Mason- Nice to meet you Michael

Mrs. Vega- Where is Jessica?

Mason- Up stairs

Mrs. Vega- Okay, tell her I’m going to work

Mason- Okay Mrs. Vega

Mrs. Vega- *Leaves*

With Jessica and Victoria

Jessica- Okay I have to get ready

Victoria- Ok, I’ll get the makeup and you get dress

Jessica- Okay *Goes to the bathroom and
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