Create Account-Personal Narrative Analysis

difficult to hear what I’m saying at the beginning. Also, my friend told me that I should include in the step of creating an account that after writing their information they should click on “Create Account” to make this step very clear. Overall, I think my video tutorial was successful and need to improve the following steps:
1- Make my voice clear at the beginning.
2- Include the step of creating an account.
3- Clarify that adding a title is very important to be able to save your book or story.