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explain everything to you in a minute.” said Captain Skillman. As they sat there quiet. Deputy Blake held his head down. “Are you okay?” ask Captain Skillman. “Yes I’m fine, I’m just a little tired.” said Deputy Blake. “Well, we won’t be long.” said Captain Skillman. As they sat there, three men walked in, Lieutenant Crimp, Lieutenant Nectar and Sergeant Prim. Captain Skillman stood up and shook their hands. “Now we can start.” said Captain Skillman. Then six special agents walked in. “What’s going on?” ask Deputy Corde. “Gentlemen, these are FBI agents and you five have been pretty busy, we’ve had you all under surveillance and you all have been participating in illegal activities.” said Captain Skillman. “HOLD ON, WHAT IS ALL THIS?” yelled …show more content…
Each of Big Dee’s entourage along with the Deputies were facing multiple charges in which the charges they faced carried life in prison. Each of them hired their own attorney and tried to get a bond set, but during their first court appearance their bond was denied. As the days, weeks and months had passed, Elizabeth was still in the hospital fighting for her life. At one point the Doctors told Stan that Elizabeth had got worse and was on life support and the machines where the only thing keeping her alive. Stan had to make a decision if he wanted her to continue to be on life support or take her off, but after hearing that from the Doctor, it was to difficult for him because of his love for her. He also thought about Miracle and Joshua being without a Mother. The Doctor explained to Stan about Elizabeth being on life support. Stan told the Doctor that he needed time to talk to Elizabeth’s family because he didn’t want to make that decision without notifying them. The Doctor was fine with that but he made sure that Stan understood that Elizabeth wasn’t breathing on her own and the life support machine was the only thing keeping her …show more content…
Katrina held his hand and said, “Doctor, I think he need a little more time, I’m going to take him out to get some fresh air and I’ll page you in a couple of hours.” “Sure, that’ll be fine, Sir again, I’m sorry, we’ve done all we could, excuse me.” said the Doctor. Then he walked out. Stan stood there for a moment staring at Elizabeth. Katrina walked over, kissed Elizabeth on the cheek then whispered, “I love you sister, I love you so much.” then she started crying. Katrina and Stan stood there for a moment, then Stan walked over and kissed Elizabeth on the cheek and whispered, “I love you baby, I’ll always love you.” then he walked out. Katrina walked over to the bed and whispered, “I love you, and no one can never take that away.” She then kissed Elizabeth on the cheek and then walked out the room. As she was headed back to the waiting room she ask the nurse if she could page the Doctor. After the nurse paged the Doctor, Katrina went on to the waiting area were everybody were waiting. “Where’s Stan?” ask Katrina. “I think he’s in the rest room.” said Katrina’s cousin Debra. “We’re waiting on the Doctor.” said

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