Creative Writing: Alyssa's Mistake

It was perfect weather outside, The lake was flowing, the birds were singing, and the sun was shining. There were many people outside laying on the sand looking up into the sky. It was 11 A.M. And the lake was quiet not a lot of noise. But that day i was feeling something inside and it seemed odd. I just sort of felt like someone was watching me everywhere I go and the same person. Then my phone buzzed....
“ to- Ally Get your act together and go on the water I’ll be waiting for you.” - E
Not only did I just get that text Beth, Jordan, Hannah, and Madison. There was 5 of us that “E” came after. The whole story is this person ( don't know who yet ) killed our best friend in the bedroom of Hannah's house at her sweet 16 party. she went missing
But what they realized was the house was near Beth's grandma’s house and they use to go over there every Friday night.
The girls got out of the car the and the house had a bunch of dolls and jewelry in it and someone of it was what Alyssa’s.. The shop was closed and said no service we know too much. But the door had a small note on it and said…
“I can’t believe you guys actually listen to me, I thought you would learn your lesson.” -E
“This is getting me worried that she knows and is watching every step we make.” Madison whispered.
Every time the girls get together they get a text. But when they're alone it makes them feel like she doesn’t care about them and let them follow their self until they get together. E makes sure they know that she will always see them or what they are doing which makes them think if they aren’t alone she won’t try to threat them. Monday morning Hannah gets mail saying “I know who killed Ally but the only way you are gonna get me to speak is if you tell me why you are having your boyfriend hack into the system with all the files because you are gonna be sorry after I report to the police.” - Unknown That night the police and a detective showed up to Hannah's house
“Hannah what was that all about?”
“Nothing mom, don't worry about it.”
“If you don't tell me right now I will go find out for myself.”
“Mom there is nothing you need to know. Nothing is going on and you don’t need to look or find out anything.”
The next day the girls went to school and heard someone stole Alyssa’s Body.
“Do you think they know we went there late at night?” Hannah said kinda quiet
“Not if we all keep our mouths shut.” Jordan said.
“I have a plan let’s all hang out at my house after school and we will have Go through the files and maybe see if we can get more information and maybe find out who E is.” said Madison.
They finished out the school day but felt very scared because they was a person that kept on appearing everywhere in a back jacket and gloves and no one could see who it was. Ally was switching classes and stopped by her locker to get her math book and one of their close friends stopped by that wasn’t in the group.
“hey Ally did you hear Alyssa’s Body is gone?” whispered rebecca.
“Yeah. they what's on your phone?” Ally