Throughout the article, he uses his personal experience to support that people should not blame the eater. It is the fast food industry who is causing obesity and a rise in diabetes cases. By using his childhood experience, the author is more believable because he was directly affected by the poor diet offered by the fast food industry. For instance, Zinczenko illustrates that he can sympathize with fast food patrons by describing how he gained weight: “By age of 15 , I had packed 212 pounds of torpid teenage”(463). His own account lets the reader connect with his story and provides a valid source of information since he lived through the problem. It also adds credibility to his argument. Zinczenko also emphasizes how easy it is for children and teenagers to have access to fast food. For example he indicates that “[l]unch and dinner for me was a daily choice between Mcdonald's, Taco Bell” (462). As Zinczenko points out, many children who are in their own struggle trying to manage a healthy diet. His account proves how the fast food industry targets those innocent children who look for a meal and end up making unhealthy choices. Zinczenko’s own story causes a tremendous impact in the reader. It also shows his motivation to write about the topic, and therefore, makes Zinczenko’s argument highly …show more content…
For example he uses the following fact to explain the increase of diabetes cases: “Before 1994 diabetes… only about 5 percent of childhood cases were obesity related…today accounts for at least 30 percent”(463). Zinczenko effectively illustrates through his fact the relationship between diabetes and obesity. He makes clear that diabetes is no longer caused by genetics , but it is due to obesity, which is caused by the high consumption of fast food. Zinczenko also provides statistics that engages the reader’s attention, illustrating how the cost in healthcare increases as the number of diabetes cases increase(do). He reports, “In 1962 $2.6 billion were spent in health care cost for diabetes; however today the amount is $100 billion a year”(463). The comparison between the statistics shows the relationship between the rise in diabetes cases caused by obesity and the the money spent to treat the disease . Through his two well supported facts and how he effectively relates them, the reader can understand his argument