Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1
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Assignment 3: Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists
Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions: 1) 5HFHLYHDFODVVPDWH¶VSDSHUIURP\RXUSURIHVVRULQFODVVLIRQ-ground; by e-mail if online).
2) Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
3) Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
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On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.
Criteria
+ Strengths
1
Provide an appropriate title and an interesting opening paragraph to appeal to your stated audience (appeal with logic, ethics, or emotion).
2
Include a defensible, relevant thesis statement in the first paragraph. (With revised thesis statement.)
3
Describe the history and status of the issue and provide an overview of the problem(s) that need to be addressed.
This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. 4
Explain the first problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (12)paragraphs.
5
Explain the second problem
(economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.). and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
6
Explain the third problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral,
etc.)