Essay

4C Yiu Sai Keung, Peter (24) 29/04/14 Short task 4 Writing a short story Correction “A Test” One day, Chris Wong was alone in the school library when suddenly there was a strange noise coming from behind one of the shelves. ‘Oh no!’ yelled Chris Wong. All the light of the library was off. The library became a mess. Suddenly, a story book was shined which called “The Game Is On”, it is about revenge. Chris Wong picked the story book up and wanted to have a look. Sadly, something was happening, one man called Tom appeared. ‘Chris, help me!’ exclaimed Tom. Chris was skinny but helpful. Chris would help him. ‘I am bullied for a long time ago because of my bald head and scruffy clothing. Everyone hates me. Please, help me get revenge on those people who bully me!’ said Tom. ‘I am having the same problem as you. Last year, I lost in a running competition. After that, I was beaten by some boys. My classmates were bystanders; they didn't want to keep me safe, ‘How can I help you on the revenge?’ asked Chris. ‘Your job is to kill them!’ shouted Tom. ‘Ok!’ answered Chris. After that, Tom disappeared. While Chris was walking out of the library, a nine years old girl, GiGi, came in. Chris was shocked. Although she was young, her action and voice was mature. ‘Where are you going?’ asked GiGi. ‘I am ready to kill people, would you like to get involved?’ said evilly Chris. GiGi said nothing. At that moment, the light was turned on. ‘Oh no, it is a test?’ yelled Chris Wong. Actually, it was a test designed by teachers, so as to check whether Chris Wong was an intelligent man or not. At last, all his classmates laughed at him. Poor Chris would be kicked out of the school. Word count: 314