Essay Writing Notes
English essay writing notes-
when given a quote look for BUY IN- how does what I know fit with the quote
Do not rewrite the introduction in the conclusion the introduction should be about where you are headed the conclusion is about where you are
Use peel in the body
P- point
E- example
E- explanation
L- link
example:
Mr so-so is innocent, he was at mc Donald’s at 12:00 and was seen by Mrs Lolo, the same time that the crime was being committed, therefore Mr so-so could not have been the murderer
class work:
“everyone needs to know their story”
evaluate this statements with reference to the text you have studied
Everyone needs to know their story to be able to feel fulfilled as they move through life. In the text “stolen” the characters that have been taken from their family search for their family again to re establish there story and feel fulfilled.
Through out stolen there are numerous examples of characters trying to find or re establish their story. One example of this is jimmy. Jimmy a teenage boy stolen from his parents spends his life trying to re establish the connection with his mother and live the life he was taken away from. Unfortunately when jimmy had learnt about the whereabouts of his mother he was too late and only found out she had passed recently. Jimmy couldn’t cope with knowing that he would never know his mother or his storey again and took his own life. Jimmy needed to know his story, his life to be able to move on but he lost the hope of learning it when he lost his mother.
“Everyone needs too know their story ” and there are numerous example of this throughout the play “stolen” which show the affect it takes on a person when they have lost it and lost hope in
when given a quote look for BUY IN- how does what I know fit with the quote
Do not rewrite the introduction in the conclusion the introduction should be about where you are headed the conclusion is about where you are
Use peel in the body
P- point
E- example
E- explanation
L- link
example:
Mr so-so is innocent, he was at mc Donald’s at 12:00 and was seen by Mrs Lolo, the same time that the crime was being committed, therefore Mr so-so could not have been the murderer
class work:
“everyone needs to know their story”
evaluate this statements with reference to the text you have studied
Everyone needs to know their story to be able to feel fulfilled as they move through life. In the text “stolen” the characters that have been taken from their family search for their family again to re establish there story and feel fulfilled.
Through out stolen there are numerous examples of characters trying to find or re establish their story. One example of this is jimmy. Jimmy a teenage boy stolen from his parents spends his life trying to re establish the connection with his mother and live the life he was taken away from. Unfortunately when jimmy had learnt about the whereabouts of his mother he was too late and only found out she had passed recently. Jimmy couldn’t cope with knowing that he would never know his mother or his storey again and took his own life. Jimmy needed to know his story, his life to be able to move on but he lost the hope of learning it when he lost his mother.
“Everyone needs too know their story ” and there are numerous example of this throughout the play “stolen” which show the affect it takes on a person when they have lost it and lost hope in