Exemplification Essay: Carrie's Trip To Colorado
Carrie, Mary called everyone she knew from town and celebrated together in Carries hometown. So they made a trip back home and celebrated. But they went back, because Carrie was graduating like a week.
Now that she got past all obstacles, she gets to go college. The major she majored in was medicine. After long hours studying in the library, all the homework she did, and the time spent from home. Now she gets to say she graduated from Brown University with a doctorate degree in Medicine. So she got a job in Colorado to be closer to her mom, but the job is in Aurora, Colorado.
After a couple years working in Colorado, the Carries’ father came up to her and asked for money. Okay, she said, and thought he would want to start being a part of
the family again. So she made a vacation to Hawaii and took her dad. When they were in Hawaii her dad was stealing money from her. Because she gave him a debit card for emergency only. But he kept taking money out and putting it on the side in his bank account. Noticing that 2,000 dollars were missing and Carrie asked her dad if he spent that much and he said no, Carrie knew it was her dad so she got her card back and she told to leave. She could not believe her dad would take advantage of her money like that. So Carrie went to her mom and told her what happened her mom was not surprised she tried telling Carrie that her dad would do something bad.
So to some people they need support to get through school and become who they want to be when they get older. People need support through the obstacles life gives them. Even though they dream to be something when they are young just believe in them like they believe in themselves. Also some people are not what they say they are going to be, and even though people are related blood wise can still not be telling the truth to you.
Now that she got past all obstacles, she gets to go college. The major she majored in was medicine. After long hours studying in the library, all the homework she did, and the time spent from home. Now she gets to say she graduated from Brown University with a doctorate degree in Medicine. So she got a job in Colorado to be closer to her mom, but the job is in Aurora, Colorado.
After a couple years working in Colorado, the Carries’ father came up to her and asked for money. Okay, she said, and thought he would want to start being a part of
the family again. So she made a vacation to Hawaii and took her dad. When they were in Hawaii her dad was stealing money from her. Because she gave him a debit card for emergency only. But he kept taking money out and putting it on the side in his bank account. Noticing that 2,000 dollars were missing and Carrie asked her dad if he spent that much and he said no, Carrie knew it was her dad so she got her card back and she told to leave. She could not believe her dad would take advantage of her money like that. So Carrie went to her mom and told her what happened her mom was not surprised she tried telling Carrie that her dad would do something bad.
So to some people they need support to get through school and become who they want to be when they get older. People need support through the obstacles life gives them. Even though they dream to be something when they are young just believe in them like they believe in themselves. Also some people are not what they say they are going to be, and even though people are related blood wise can still not be telling the truth to you.