Inroduction talk about the great depression ‘two million men were homeless sleeping on the streets use some controversial topic use a opening sentence like ‘how would you feel if you were secluded away from the rest of society?’ summarise the story &describe the historical context also talk about stienback &his background how did the great depression make the workes lonely?
SECTION2 SETTING THE LIVES OF THE WORKERS (2PARAGRATHS)
Introductory sentence what im ,going to write about in this section the other ranch workers cannot understand that george cares for lenni ‘well I never seen one guy take so much trouble for another guy’ the boss is suspicios of george and lennie.the men pay for tempary company of women all apart from crooks and lennie,’’ ill go to a cathouse all damnn night’’ then a condluding sentace what I have spoke abnout .
SECTION4 CROOKS…..
Talk about who you are going to talk about then talk aboit how secluded crooks is from the rest of the world he isn’t allowed to go in the bunkhouse because he is black so therefore does not have the same status as the white men ‘’i aint allowed in because im black’ he also does not like anybody in his room ‘’this heres my room aint nobody got a right to be here but me’’ he talks about how the ranch man racially abuse him and just terrorise him basically ‘’cause im black …they say I stink but to me you all stink’’ he is very unwelcomeing wictch is completey understandable for the way he gets treated! But he sort of like the company obviously anyone would the boss beats him up ‘’ the boss gives him hell when hes mad’’ he is marganlised/socialed once a year ‘they let the stablebuck in that year’’ slim has respect for him ‘oh sure crooks ill come right out an put it on’’ when lennie came in he stiffend and a scowl came on his face this is a quote he watns people to feel his pain & sypathise for him