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Fatima wakes up early one morning just like every morning. She gets up out of bed and changes into her day clothes. Then she heads out of her room in the tent. She wanted some privacy from her family and was allowed to move out of her home with her family and over to her own tent. She Prepares her breakfast then eats and heads out to the well to get some water. On her way there she sees her father walking towards the counsel hut.

“Good morning father.” She yells out. Her father turns around looking for the source of the sound. As he spots his daughter waving at him, he smiles and yells out.

“Goodmorning Fatima!” she then turns and heads to the well. Fatima makes her usual rounds around the shops looking at the different foods, spices and
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“Oh I see. Ok then have a good day” Fatima said a little up set that she couldn't get the glasses. So she made her way to the well and started to get the water that would kept her hydrated. As she is getting her water, she felt a presence gazing at her from behind. When she turned around and locked gazes with a boy her age, all of the air left her as she stared into the eyes of the one who has stole her heart with nothing more then a shy smile and a becoming blush.He walked over to her and said.

“Hi, My name is Santiago what’s yours.” Fatima was at a complete loss for words as butterfly danced in her stomach. His deep brown eyes kept her planted there and filled her with excitement, desire, and above all this aching feeling in her heart.
“This must be what love feels like. It's so overwhelming, I want to run away but his eyes,they feel like they are keeping me planted right where I stand. It's scary but i like it.” Fatima thought to herself. She then realized that he was waiting for her to answer his question. “My name is Fatima” She said with as much courage as she could

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