But his approach in describing death is quite different with Emily Dickinson's. From the opening of his poem, he starts with a personified critical hawk "The spotted hawks swoops by and accuses me/he complains of my gab and my loitering."(1). Not like Emily Dickinson's death which is personified as gentleman at first stanza, Whitman takes a while to work up to the topic, death. Upon reaching the fourth stanza, with line "I depart as air."(5-1). he reveals what he really wants to say in this poem by comparing dying to turning into air. While Emily Dickinson uses meter and slant rhyme to make a poetic sound, he uses poetic device, alliteration "You will hardly know who I am or what I mean /But I shall be good health to you nevertheless/ And filter and fibre your blood"(7). to emphasize death as a reunion with nature. Rhythm is created by repeating strong "f" sound. Again, he uses alliteration "Failing to fetch me at first keep encouraged"(8-1). to underscore the seriousness of his command to the readers to find him in nature by leaving words: "I stop somewhere waiting for
But his approach in describing death is quite different with Emily Dickinson's. From the opening of his poem, he starts with a personified critical hawk "The spotted hawks swoops by and accuses me/he complains of my gab and my loitering."(1). Not like Emily Dickinson's death which is personified as gentleman at first stanza, Whitman takes a while to work up to the topic, death. Upon reaching the fourth stanza, with line "I depart as air."(5-1). he reveals what he really wants to say in this poem by comparing dying to turning into air. While Emily Dickinson uses meter and slant rhyme to make a poetic sound, he uses poetic device, alliteration "You will hardly know who I am or what I mean /But I shall be good health to you nevertheless/ And filter and fibre your blood"(7). to emphasize death as a reunion with nature. Rhythm is created by repeating strong "f" sound. Again, he uses alliteration "Failing to fetch me at first keep encouraged"(8-1). to underscore the seriousness of his command to the readers to find him in nature by leaving words: "I stop somewhere waiting for