He cited some important question in the passage, he use“Too many young people graduate without a realistic picture of their own talents and aptitudes.” from this quote the writer obvious to demonstrates people go to college directly is not a good choice, because people so easily to lose the direction even they don’t have an accurate purpose to decide what is the best choice for themselves. On the other hands, there are plenty of non-college choose such as nanny, military service, hospital aide or teaching english oversea, also can found a job to instead go to the college. This real-life experience can gain many useful skills and improve the social ability. These evidence also make the claims stronger and more effective in the
He cited some important question in the passage, he use“Too many young people graduate without a realistic picture of their own talents and aptitudes.” from this quote the writer obvious to demonstrates people go to college directly is not a good choice, because people so easily to lose the direction even they don’t have an accurate purpose to decide what is the best choice for themselves. On the other hands, there are plenty of non-college choose such as nanny, military service, hospital aide or teaching english oversea, also can found a job to instead go to the college. This real-life experience can gain many useful skills and improve the social ability. These evidence also make the claims stronger and more effective in the