He Kills, She Kills
Carolyn Wilbon
November 7th 2012
Narrative Essay
6th Period
Ms. Tuck
He Kills, She Kills
She knew he was hiding something, but she just didn’t know what it was. She tried her best to figure it out but she couldn’t put her finger on it. Macy looked at her husband in worry. It seemed like something was wrong, but she would ask him when the time was right. Macy is 35 years old with two adorable kids. The oldest, Naveah, is eight years old. The youngest, Brian, is five; However, the man Macy is married to is not their biological father. The biological father of the two kids cheated on Macy with another woman and later filed for divorce. Macy had went through a slight depression, but then she met Austin. He’s the guy who helped her through the divorce, became her best friend through it all, and eventually swept her off of her feet. Macy fell in love and eventually they got married. Little does she know what kind of man her husband really is.
Macy decided to throw a birthday party for Brian since he was turning six in a couple of days. Macy is looking for Austin and finds him sitting down just staring at Brian in disgust. Austin looked as if he couldn’t stand him! When Austin first met the kids, Brian had really taken a liking to him. When Austin would leave, Brian would always ask “Where is Austin?” So did Naveah. She really took a liking to Austin also. She thinks of him as a second father, but lately it seems as if the kids have been getting on his nerves. Thoughts crossed Macy’s mind as she looked at Austin as he looked at Brian in disgust. She told herself she would later ask Austin what was wrong with him.
After everybody left the party Macy asked Austin “Honey, what was wrong with you at the party today? I noticed you were looking at Brian as if he had did something to make you mad.” Even as Macy asked Austin the question, he still had the same look from the party. Austin said with a smile, “Nothing sweetie. I’ve just been tired lately and
November 7th 2012
Narrative Essay
6th Period
Ms. Tuck
He Kills, She Kills
She knew he was hiding something, but she just didn’t know what it was. She tried her best to figure it out but she couldn’t put her finger on it. Macy looked at her husband in worry. It seemed like something was wrong, but she would ask him when the time was right. Macy is 35 years old with two adorable kids. The oldest, Naveah, is eight years old. The youngest, Brian, is five; However, the man Macy is married to is not their biological father. The biological father of the two kids cheated on Macy with another woman and later filed for divorce. Macy had went through a slight depression, but then she met Austin. He’s the guy who helped her through the divorce, became her best friend through it all, and eventually swept her off of her feet. Macy fell in love and eventually they got married. Little does she know what kind of man her husband really is.
Macy decided to throw a birthday party for Brian since he was turning six in a couple of days. Macy is looking for Austin and finds him sitting down just staring at Brian in disgust. Austin looked as if he couldn’t stand him! When Austin first met the kids, Brian had really taken a liking to him. When Austin would leave, Brian would always ask “Where is Austin?” So did Naveah. She really took a liking to Austin also. She thinks of him as a second father, but lately it seems as if the kids have been getting on his nerves. Thoughts crossed Macy’s mind as she looked at Austin as he looked at Brian in disgust. She told herself she would later ask Austin what was wrong with him.
After everybody left the party Macy asked Austin “Honey, what was wrong with you at the party today? I noticed you were looking at Brian as if he had did something to make you mad.” Even as Macy asked Austin the question, he still had the same look from the party. Austin said with a smile, “Nothing sweetie. I’ve just been tired lately and