was based on my first paragraph. I had no prior organization. I just followed the flow of my introduction. It was really successful for me to write like this. The more I thought about organization, the harder it was for me to write the full essay. My peers helped me by giving me suggestions with my word use and proof reading my whole essay. I followed their suggestions and improved my essay. My only sentence problem was putting the verb into the correct tense. This has always been an issue to me, because I don’t use previous organization. I follow the flow of words.
was based on my first paragraph. I had no prior organization. I just followed the flow of my introduction. It was really successful for me to write like this. The more I thought about organization, the harder it was for me to write the full essay. My peers helped me by giving me suggestions with my word use and proof reading my whole essay. I followed their suggestions and improved my essay. My only sentence problem was putting the verb into the correct tense. This has always been an issue to me, because I don’t use previous organization. I follow the flow of words.