How Does Edgar Allan Poe Respond To The Masque Of The Red Death

This infamous short story by renowned writer, Edgar Allan Poe, contains many dramatic twists and turns while brutally describing the murderous events that took place at a marvelous masquerade ball. As the story begins Poe walks the reader through each of the rooms in the house. When he describes that sound made by the clock it shows that there is a nervousness in the crowd of people. Later on in the party this happens again but instead of just a single daunting ring there were twelve, which brought fear to the guests. Once the last bell had sounded, a mysterious masked figure appeared and took everyone by surprise. The Prince, who is the host of the celebration, speaks against the masked man and declares that they should see his face and hang him for mockery. This leads to
Creating a different ending that appeals to a reader my seem very simple, but attempting to preserve the writing style of the original composer is the hard part. Edgar Allan Poe had a specific way of creating his work and describing each scene. Here is my version of how “The Masque of the Red Death” should have ended;

As the last ring from the grand clock filled the room, a powerful feeling of fear took over. The rush of cold air flooded the ballroom. As the doors burst open they revealed the masked figure standing tall and confident as if he did not belong. The dark maroon color of his attire seemed something similar to the red room in the mansion of Prince Prospero. The host emerged from the crowd intimidated and insulted by this mysterious figure who lacked the prestige to attend a