Hrm 531 Week 3 Quiz
REDUNDANCIES, JARGON, SLANG, CLICHÉS. Revise the following sentences to eliminate the redundancies, jargon, slang and clichés, and any other wordiness
Example First and foremost, we plan to emphasize an instructional training program. revision First we plan to emphasize an instructional(or training) program. 1. Last but not least, Troy collected together as much support material as possible to avoid getting burned in cash losses or bottom-line profits.
2. It was the consensus of opinion of members of committee that the committee should meet at 11a.m in the morning.
3. If you will refer back to the contract, you will definitely find that there are specific specifications that prevent anyone from blowing the budget. …show more content…
In the normal course of events, we would wait until such time as we had adequate enough credit reports.
PRECISE VERBS. Revise the following sentences, centering the action in the verbs
Example The webmaster made a description of the project
Revision The webmaster described the project.
1. Mr. Thomas gave an appraisal of the home’s value.
2. Can you bring about a change in our company travel policy?
3. Web-based customer service will produce the effect of reduction in overall cost
4. In writing this proposal, we must make application of new government regulations.
5. The board of directors made a recommendation affirming the abandonment of the pilot project.
6. An investigator made a determination of the first damages.
7. We hope to have production of our new line of products by January.
8. The duty of the comptroller is verification of departmental budgets.
9. Please make a correction in my account to reflect my late payment.
VIVID WORDS. Revise the following sentences to include vivid and concrete language. Add appropriate words.
Example They said it was a long way off.
Revision Managements officials announced that the merger would not to take place for two
Example First and foremost, we plan to emphasize an instructional training program. revision First we plan to emphasize an instructional(or training) program. 1. Last but not least, Troy collected together as much support material as possible to avoid getting burned in cash losses or bottom-line profits.
2. It was the consensus of opinion of members of committee that the committee should meet at 11a.m in the morning.
3. If you will refer back to the contract, you will definitely find that there are specific specifications that prevent anyone from blowing the budget. …show more content…
In the normal course of events, we would wait until such time as we had adequate enough credit reports.
PRECISE VERBS. Revise the following sentences, centering the action in the verbs
Example The webmaster made a description of the project
Revision The webmaster described the project.
1. Mr. Thomas gave an appraisal of the home’s value.
2. Can you bring about a change in our company travel policy?
3. Web-based customer service will produce the effect of reduction in overall cost
4. In writing this proposal, we must make application of new government regulations.
5. The board of directors made a recommendation affirming the abandonment of the pilot project.
6. An investigator made a determination of the first damages.
7. We hope to have production of our new line of products by January.
8. The duty of the comptroller is verification of departmental budgets.
9. Please make a correction in my account to reflect my late payment.
VIVID WORDS. Revise the following sentences to include vivid and concrete language. Add appropriate words.
Example They said it was a long way off.
Revision Managements officials announced that the merger would not to take place for two