Mackintosh tells the story using alternating perspectives of Zoe and Kelly; with additional random passages from the creator of the website. This is effective because it allows the readers to view the story from the victim and the cop’s perspective of the investigation. The messages form the creator of the website interest the reader because it makes them wonder who they really are. From these passages, the creator’s words show that whoever they are, they must know Zoe. An example of this is when they say, “You think I’ve gone too far. Risking the lives of women, I’ve never met is bad enough, but this?” (347). Having Kelly as a perspective allows the readers to see how the investigation progresses, as Zoe would not have access to this information. From this, the readers learn that the website is like a dating website that has women’s pictures and commutes. The site specifically targets those who follow the exact same routine everyday and use the underground
Mackintosh tells the story using alternating perspectives of Zoe and Kelly; with additional random passages from the creator of the website. This is effective because it allows the readers to view the story from the victim and the cop’s perspective of the investigation. The messages form the creator of the website interest the reader because it makes them wonder who they really are. From these passages, the creator’s words show that whoever they are, they must know Zoe. An example of this is when they say, “You think I’ve gone too far. Risking the lives of women, I’ve never met is bad enough, but this?” (347). Having Kelly as a perspective allows the readers to see how the investigation progresses, as Zoe would not have access to this information. From this, the readers learn that the website is like a dating website that has women’s pictures and commutes. The site specifically targets those who follow the exact same routine everyday and use the underground