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New attraction - recommendation for winning entry
I believe the Sunken Ship Museum - Yangjiang, South China should win the competition. It is unique, and has a huge commercial potential.
This report outlines the key features of the new attraction that we feel should win the competition. It gives reasons why the project was selected and explains why the new attraction should be commercial success.
Features
1. Unique. The museum is located underwater. it is the only one of its kind in Asia, and one of the few in the world.
2. Historical and cultural. The main exhibit is a ship with its 800-year-old history and culture.
3. Dreamlike. The old ship is 24 metres below the surface of the sea. There is a transparent underwater corridor for visitors to walk through and see the ship. What's more exciting is that they can see that the wood is still taking on a brownish color, which shows that it has not carbonized over the past 800 years.
4. Enjoyable. Visitors can enjoy the precious art object which have been taken from the ship.
The museum is the first theme museum in the world to reveal to visitors its process of underwater archaeology. Such a unique way of protection and display is the first time in similar museums of the world, and it has a positive effect in boosting the curiosity of people. In addition visitor will have an enjoyable and unforgettable experience. There is no doubt that visitor will be happy to spend money going to the Sunken Ship Museum. And we will earn a lot of money. These are exactly the purposes that you provide finance for the project.
I believe the Sunken Ship Museum - Yangjiang, South China should win the competition. It is unique, and has a huge commercial potential.
This report outlines the key features of the new attraction that we feel should win the competition. It gives reasons why the project was selected and explains why the new attraction should be commercial success.
Features
1. Unique. The museum is located underwater. it is the only one of its kind in Asia, and one of the few in the world.
2. Historical and cultural. The main exhibit is a ship with its 800-year-old history and culture.
3. Dreamlike. The old ship is 24 metres below the surface of the sea. There is a transparent underwater corridor for visitors to walk through and see the ship. What's more exciting is that they can see that the wood is still taking on a brownish color, which shows that it has not carbonized over the past 800 years.
4. Enjoyable. Visitors can enjoy the precious art object which have been taken from the ship.
The museum is the first theme museum in the world to reveal to visitors its process of underwater archaeology. Such a unique way of protection and display is the first time in similar museums of the world, and it has a positive effect in boosting the curiosity of people. In addition visitor will have an enjoyable and unforgettable experience. There is no doubt that visitor will be happy to spend money going to the Sunken Ship Museum. And we will earn a lot of money. These are exactly the purposes that you provide finance for the project.