Steinbeck is trying to communicate the fact that Crooks, although deformed, is stubborn to prove that he is an independent person. Crooks ‘demanded’ that other people kept their distance. As he didn’t have the right to see them in the bunk house, they would not have the right to visit him in his room. Steinbeck has used the dynamic verb ‘demanded’ to show how adamant he is about the other workers respecting his privacy. The word ‘demanded’ also implies that there may have been argument over his privacy which again reflects the hardship that Black people were going through at the time.
Crooks is presented by Steinbeck as a defensive person about his weakness. Lennie catches Crooks when ‘his shirt was out of his jeans’ he is also rubbing ointment on his back which is his major physical fault. Steinbeck describes Crooks as a very meticulous person with a ‘swept’ and ‘neat’ room, this leads us to think that Crooks is not a man to be scruffy with his appearance either. The structure of the simple sentence in the context of the paragraph also suggests that Steinbeck wants to