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A: 1.) Adequate 2.) Inadequate; it’s written in a question form and the answer isn’t already obvious to the reader. 3.) Adequate 4.) Inadequate; you shouldn’t make your thesis statement merely an announcement of your subject matter or a description of your intentions. 5.) Adequate 6.) Inadequate; the writer is trying to explain two different issues in one essay. 7.) Inadequate; the writer is being unreasonable and may be insulting his readers. 8.) Adequate 9.) Adequate 10.) Inadequate; the statement is merely stating a fact that is self-evident or a dead-end topic.

B: 1.) Many people have a negative experience when applying for a job. It clearly states an opinion that will be supported in the essay.
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5.) Clarity in the speech and writing is absolutely essential in the business world today.

6.) Historical data suggest that the world’s first money, in the form of coins, were made in Lydia, a country that is now part of Turkey.

7.) Bananas, rich in vitamins and low in fat, are rated the most popular fruit in America.

8.) There are many children in this country whom appreciate a big plate of hot grits, but none of the Hall kids like the Southern
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10.) Many people consider Johnny Appleseed a mythical figure, but now two local historians, authors of well-known books on the subject, argue that he was a real person named John Chapman.

A: 1.) He couldn’t wait to hear country star, Sue Flay, sing her version of, “I’ve Been Flushed from the Bathroom of Your Heart.”

2.) “If you were in Wyoming and couldn’t hear any wind blowing, what would people call you?” asked Jethro. “Dead,” replied his buddy Herman.

3.) It was believed by Aztec ruler Montezuma that chocolate had magical power and could act as an aphrodisiac.

4.) Tammy’s favorite band is Opie Gone Bad. So she is always buying their concert tickets, even though she can’t afford to.

5.) Suspicions of arson are being raised following the burning of the new Chip and Dale Furniture Factory by the Fire Department.

B: 1.) I saw what she was hiding behind her back.

2.) He came around her yesterday asking questions, but we’re use to that.

3.) Correct

4.) Austin doesn’t like to be awakened until noon.

5.) The kids have done good work all


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