Is my meaning clear?”(43). The decision to choose one word over another can be the difference between describing a harmless scene, to a more ominous image. One of the sentences Barnes writes, and decides to replace a specific word in order to transform a relatively silly saying to a more dangerous scene was, “People running around like “’spiders’”, darting in and out of the shadows beneath the full moon, intentions unfathomable”(57). The saying that we are used to hearing has the word cockroaches instead of the word “spiders”. Spiders with their eight-leg bodies, and fangs fill with venom ready to turn the insides of their pray into mush to consume them, paints a more ominous scene. By replacing an animal to a more frightful one to a regular sentence it elevates the mood to a cautious feeling. The sentence describes the behavior of the people who cannot sleep and allows the readers to assume a violent scene will be coming in the next one. The scene of Paul lying on the floor while a construction worker (which Paul names him as a Blemmye) is on top of him punching him all over follows
Is my meaning clear?”(43). The decision to choose one word over another can be the difference between describing a harmless scene, to a more ominous image. One of the sentences Barnes writes, and decides to replace a specific word in order to transform a relatively silly saying to a more dangerous scene was, “People running around like “’spiders’”, darting in and out of the shadows beneath the full moon, intentions unfathomable”(57). The saying that we are used to hearing has the word cockroaches instead of the word “spiders”. Spiders with their eight-leg bodies, and fangs fill with venom ready to turn the insides of their pray into mush to consume them, paints a more ominous scene. By replacing an animal to a more frightful one to a regular sentence it elevates the mood to a cautious feeling. The sentence describes the behavior of the people who cannot sleep and allows the readers to assume a violent scene will be coming in the next one. The scene of Paul lying on the floor while a construction worker (which Paul names him as a Blemmye) is on top of him punching him all over follows