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Mall: Family and Duty Black Ops
Gregory Brown 5-7-13
Class 623 Ms. Roman

Lost In the Mall!
I got lost in the mall. I was in the mall when my mom went into the store and I wasn’t looking and I said mom where are you and I was in the game section with my brother we was playing the game in Wal-Mart. I was looking in every store looking for my mom. I was nervous and wondering where my mom was. I was with my brother we all around the mall and out we even looked in the car I called my cousin to come get us but he couldn’t come. So I and my brother just sat down and stop looking then we saw our sister but we didn’t see our mom. I and my brother was very nervous and curious for our mom to come back and get us. I was looking in the McDonald’s for my mom but she wasn’t there either my brother looked somewhere else while looked in the in the other stores in the mall. The mall was very big so me and my brother tried to look everywhere but the mall closed. So me and Brother couldn’t find my mom so we walked outside and we kept walking . Someone Called us and it was our mom we went to her and she said where were you two. So after that she took us to get food then we went home to go to sleep for school. I left to go home then to go play on Xbox with my friends. Then after that we went to go play basketball. We stayed there for a long time. Me and my cousin played NBA 2k13 all day until he left then I played Call of Duty Black Ops 2 with my friend. Later after that I went to Red Lobster for my brother
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