On the Martin Luther King Jr. Memorial website there is that gives a thorough description of the monument. It tells us that Dr. King’s memorial was built right in the center of the famous cherry blossoms trees. They say that it is not a coincidence that the flowers begin to
Cited: About the Memorial." Design Elements-Build the Dream. National Memorial Project Foundation, n.d. Web. 20 Sept. 2012. . Hundreds Celebrate First Anniversary of Martin Luther King Memorial." Political News and Opinion from a Multicultural Point of View. Politics365, 12 Sept. 2012. Web. 20 Sept. 2012. . Manteuffel, Rachel. "Martin Luther King a Drum Major? If You Say So." Washington Post. The Washington Post, 26 Aug. 2011. Web. 20 Sept. 2012. . Writer’s Letter My paper addresses the newly built monument, The Martin Luther King Jr. Memorial. Throughout the paper I discuss several aspects of the memorial and the significance of each part to history. The main topic of my paper is that although this was a beautifully thought out monument and the various elements with perfect with Dr. King’s life, there can always be something that may be wrong. There may be controversy even through perfection. Throughout writing this piece, I definitely learned how to analyze text in a more in depth way. From my free write to my rough draft, I really didn’t know how to construct my claims and my support as well as using the rhetorical terms in the way. My timing for these terms also was not where it should have been. I used several terms in places that I shouldn’t of. I feel like my full understanding of these terms was not where it should have been. I think another problem I had was fully understanding what the assignment was asking at first, but the comments from my peers and my instructor actually helped me transform my paper a little more. A huge problem I was having was going more in depth with my analysis of the text and a way I addressed that was adding more examples in the text to support the argument I was making as well as the authors. I do think this was a major problem in my paper so I wish that I could have did a better job with this concept. I think that my most beautiful paragraph was my introduction because it described in great detail the monument and the meaning of mostly every element of the memorial. I have to say my worst paragraphs were my body ones because I feel I could have expanded more. Overall, I feel that I tried my best to come up with a quality paper and I enjoyed learning about Dr. King’s monument.